Pringles feedback

It's always good to keep tabs on the general public's point of view. Here's a comment I discovered on youtube for my new Pringles Cheese ad.

My philosophy is there is always room for improvement with my work. This comment by NaZReD appears to confirm this.

I don't mind the criticism but was the kiss at the end really necessary?

Here's the link to my version of the film

However if NaZReD has inspired you to troll my work (with or without a kiss) here's the link to the film on Youtube (over 1 million hits baby)